More feedback: The Enemy Within
Jun. 9th, 2006 02:59 pmThis log between Cain and Marie-Ange? For some reason sets off perfectly the two characters, and where they've changed since they first arrived. Possibly my backreading for the Wiki talking, but yeah, I really like this. Simple and yet loaded with meaning. Great job you two.
And the line about the gesture being more suited to a scruffy Cajun? Made me giggle out loud.