Dogs of War

[ashenmote.livejournal.com]

That was enjoyable to read. Especially the logs preparing the final confrontation - all very different in mood and setting and tailored to the characters, and building anticipation with every log and piece of detective work falling in place. Just the sort of straightforward plot I love to see in a TV series or to play in an RPG campaign.

And then, what a sobering finish! O_o
Poor Josh. I mean, he sure learned an important lesson there, but still. And also, poor Amanda.

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[diamond-dust06.livejournal.com]

I was in such a rush to post those that I completely forgot a very important note. Erin wrote Josh and she was awesome. Thank you, Erin!!!

And thanks for enjoying it, too :)